To feel the joy in smiling

        The  joy  in  smiling..

When  you  smile  at  a  person

       You  get  back  a  grin

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Written for: Haiku Heights #146

Prompt: Joy

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^This is my first attempt at Haiku please do leave your remarks.. 😛

^Song of the day: “Hallowed Be Thy Name” by Iron Maiden

^Lots more to come, stay tuned! 🙂

 

 

 

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10 thoughts on “To feel the joy in smiling

    • Thank you 😀
      Yes sometimes we get a smile back too,but most of the times a beam and I used it instead of smile as it felt more ‘joy’ous 😛
      Thank you for visiting keep prompting 😉

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  1. Well done Abhishek..as Leo said… who initially guided me about Haiku..it’s a 5-7-5…. perfect.. but if I were to write this..I will make it 3-5-3 like this..I am tempted because I felt inspired with your lines..

    Joyous smile;
    lo, she responds with
    just a grin..

    And buddy, thanks for your very generous comment on my page.. you can return to read more..

    RS:)

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    • Sir its an honour for me to have your comments here 🙂 and that 3-5-3 Oh I just loved it beyond anything..a genius haiku..Thank you very much for visiting..and yes I would surely love to hear from you more! Thank you! 🙂

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