The joy in smiling..
When you smile at a person
You get back a grin
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Written for: Haiku Heights #146
Prompt: Joy
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^This is my first attempt at Haiku please do leave your remarks.. 😛
^Song of the day: “Hallowed Be Thy Name” by Iron Maiden
^Lots more to come, stay tuned! 🙂
Depends 😛 Sometimes you get a smile back too 🙂 Try smiling at a baby…
Syllabically perfect on first shot. Nice work.
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Thank you 😀
Yes sometimes we get a smile back too,but most of the times a beam and I used it instead of smile as it felt more ‘joy’ous 😛
Thank you for visiting keep prompting 😉
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Well done Abhishek..as Leo said… who initially guided me about Haiku..it’s a 5-7-5…. perfect.. but if I were to write this..I will make it 3-5-3 like this..I am tempted because I felt inspired with your lines..
Joyous smile;
lo, she responds with
just a grin..
And buddy, thanks for your very generous comment on my page.. you can return to read more..
RS:)
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Sir its an honour for me to have your comments here 🙂 and that 3-5-3 Oh I just loved it beyond anything..a genius haiku..Thank you very much for visiting..and yes I would surely love to hear from you more! Thank you! 🙂
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Lovely debut,. try writing sets of haiku,. you can a have storyline then!, welcome to haiku family 🙂
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Thank you Jaideep yes I surely will…thank you for the visit do drop by again 😉
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Hey ,,,
its beautifully witten …
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
Stay tuned for more! 😉
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haha, fun and nice haiku 🙂 good job.
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Thank you Neha for such a lovely comment 🙂 Do visit again for more 😉
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